So I’m trying something new on Chrono Loran this week. Rather then doing random updates I am trying to think things through a bit more. I pulled out my sketchbook and wrote out a thumb nailed a weeks worth of comics. I wanted it to be a complete story over the week of 5 comics and hint at what next mondays comic would be about.
I think I’m doing ok for a first attempt but I see obvious room for improvement. Today’s strip for instance was really a clumsy way to set it in motion. Honestly that page was destined to be weak. I wanted to abort from the storyline and that planet and get to the ship asap. I need to learn to make story bridges funnier. The rest of the week I should be able to inject more of my personality into. I get to introduce a new set of characters, who are function as one entity. The needlessly mysterious people who paid for the ship. collectively reffered to as ‘the company’ I have ideas as to the peoples true identities, which is helping me write for them. But likely they will change before they were revealed. I mean if they are revealed. Thats way down the line I see as I currently see no reason that they would ever need to be shown. At least not until I’ve had all the fun with them I can.
Included the first page of thumbnails I did. I don’t really think there is any major spoilers in the doodles. I don’t think they are intelligible to anyone who is not me.